Getting back into the flow of the story isn't hard, because the characters are driving the story. My problem is I keep think I already wrote parts of the story that I had meant to, or in my foggy brain dreamed I had. Anyway I had to go back and reread the last six pages to figure out how badly I screwed up. Tomorrow I will hopefully make some headway.
Sneak peak of Gina and Wes (unedited):
“I’m
going to tell you something I don’t think anyone else ever has.” Gina doubted
that. “And I want you to listen to me.”
Whatever
he was about to say she’d most likely heard in one or more of the many lectures
she’d gotten from her father and sister. “What’s that?”
“Don’t
be so hard on yourself.” Gina just started at him until he laughed. “I told you.
Gina, take it from someone who knows you better than you think, you've come a
long way in a very short time. You’re going to make mistakes. We all do. And
there’s nothing wrong with blowing off a little steam from time to time.”
“I
was reckless.”
“Did
you use protection?”
His
question took her by surprise for just a second. “Of course.”
“Then
you weren't reckless. A little impulsive, but hardly irresponsible.”
“But
what if someone saw me sneaking out of there?” Oh how she hoped no one
recognized her.
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